Author: Kim
Subject: Poet needed
My parents are celebrating 50 years next week and I would like to have a poem that expresses my thanks for being such role models for marriage to put in their memory book.
They have 5 kids (4 girls and 1 boy) and 3 beloved grandchildren. They give and give. I love them very much and want to be able to express it but I am not too good with these things. There have been alot of good and bads times..with dad in the service for 20+ years. Vietnam....
Thanks for helping me make this a wonderful day. I just don't know what to say. I am terrible with words.
Replies:
[> Re: Poet needed -- jacksmum, 06:34:52 05/24/05 Tue [1]
Hi Kim
This still needs work but wanted you to know I'm working on it.
Sue
It's your anniversary
fifty years have passed
since you said "I do"
time's gone so fast.
So many changes
times good and bad
some memories are happy
others make you sad.
But through it all
your love stayed strong
in each other's eyes
and hearts you belong.
Raising a family
with love and trust
showing what marriage means
and that respect is a must.
You're great role models
all your children agree
grandchildren adore you
that's plain to see.
So love and best wishes
to my parents so fine
you lead by example
and I'm proud you're mine
© Sue Pitchfork 2005~
[> [> Re: Poet needed -- Kim, 19:12:33 05/24/05 Tue [1]
This is great. You said exactly what I wanted to!
[> Re: Poet needed -- jacksmum, 22:47:12 05/24/05 Tue [1]
Thank You Kim. I'm glad you like it.
((HUGS))
I hope your parents have many more wonderful years together.
Sue.
